This week’s comic update features the senses shattering action of…JG on vacation!
JG’S VACATION
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JG CREATOR NOTES
Boy this one was hard.
Here’s some behind the scenes knowledge – I set out to make this comic only 3 panels long…I just couldn’t do it.
If you’ve seen some of the comics of previous weeks, you would have noticed that they were getting very long. This is mostly because I didn’t want to make those hard choices that an editor would make for me.
I can get away with this, because on the web I don’t really have space limitations like I would in a printed book. Still, I decided to try to tighten up the storytelling and really see if I could fit a story into just 3 panels.
Man, it’s much harder than it looks. How the heck do people like Scott Adams (of Dilbert fame) do it???
Or creators like Bill Watterson of Calvin and Hobbes fame?
Sometimes they would slip a 4th panel in there, and on Sundays they would bust out an 8-9 panel comic -but to pack in a funny, coherent story within 3-4 panels every day? Serious skills.
Well, I’m going to keep on with the exercise for a couple of weeks at least, but I suspect we’ll be seeing some longer comics after that.
Oh yeah, the Monday Comics Slideshow is now available! It doesn’t work exactly how I want it to, but I think it will do for those who want to just cycle through the comics without bothering with the blog post format.
I’ll see you back here next week for part 2 of JG’s Vacation!
I bet that is tough! You could maybe lose the last frame or somehow merge it with the third? We can guess JG won’t be happy to see Ole Man Winter! :)
Hi Annie!
No I’m NEVER happy to see Old Man Winter! lol…
Yeah I need to really work hard on economizing my storytelling. Some of this stuff I’d like to bring to print one day so I’d like to eventually settle on a standard size that will work for both mediums.
Thanks for dropping in!
John,
This hilarious comic is right on time. I need a vacation, too. Know any good spots?
Hey, is that “sipping purple drank” equivalent to proclaiming, “that Leona Lewis can sang!” LOL
Don’t let those borderline bozos kick sand in your face. Go all Hulk on them and show them that chair-squishing, burger-chomping, Bloorgh yelling Mr. Hyde. They’ll get the message and back up offa you.
Cheers,
Mitch
Mitch it’s definitely time for [another] vacation! lol.
I’ll tell you where there aren’t any good spots…WISCONSIN!
Re: Purple drank, i hear a lot of the kids these days screaming about purple drank. I hope it doesn’t mean something other than what it seems..no, it couldn’t be lol
Next week I’ll definitely have to show these guys who’s boss!
Hi John,
Oops! According to Google, it’s cough syrup mixed with Sprite.
I liked my interpretation better :(
Cheers,
Mitch
This comic is such a great post! You had a great idea to do this..You are very creative..I am looking forward to learn how to do this..
Hi Mitch!
I know it is really very tough to fit it in a comics in three panels. It is a challenge to convey the message with less number of words. You have done it wonderfully. I always fight with my boss for a raise. I hope I win this time :-).
Hey Leo, I’ll assume you were talking to me lol!
thanks for the compliment, and I hope you can get that raise, too!
Hi!
I am eager to know what happens next in the JG’s vacation. I hope all the fun does not spoiled. Actually, I also need a break and hope to go on a vacation next year :-1. Mitch, on web everyone likes to read short and simple stuff. You have done great with this three panel comics.
Hey John, stay tuned next week when the tale will continue! Thanks for the compliment!
I did? No, you mean JOHN did! LOL
I’m just the guy you hear in the background LMAO
Cheers,
Mitch
Yeah Mitch, you did a great job on this…waitaminnit…I did this comic! lol!
Mitch you’ll have to show me this neat little trick of yours :)
too funny!
I like so much comics, but I am not good as you! You are so professional, LOL. Congrats!This is the first time I saw this blog and I am really impressed:)
hi Anna,
welcome to the blog. thanks so much for the compliment and I’m glad you enjoyed it!
You are great with your comics artwork! Congrats! I enjoyed it…
Thank you Katherine! I’m glad you enjoyed it :)
I love the comic JG! And are you good friends with Mitch? If that’s the case, even if not, you should do a comic where MItch will be the one writing the dialogue! That would be really great! Or let Mitch do the comic (since “he” was the one who did this one) and you write! Hahaha! Can’t wait next week!
Hey Sandra, thanks for the compliment! Yes Mitch is my good buddy, so if anyone else beside me it gonna get the credit for this thing I don’t mind if it’s him, lol
Stick around the fun continues this coming Monday!
Funny! I feel sorry for JG. His vacation is cut short. Haha!
Thanks for the sympathy, Hugh! We’ll have to see if I can get my vacation back on track!
Whoa, I hope the vacation will not be ruined. I’ll definitely see the succeeding parts.
Thanks Tony! Yes stick around for the exciting part two of JG’s Vacation to see what happens next!
:))) Great idea for a funny cartoon! I feel sorry for JG and his short vacation!!! :)
Hi Eleonora, yes thanks for your sympathy LOL. :)
hahaha definitely these are hilarious comics. I love and enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting! :)
Hi Karylle, I’m glad you enjoy them, thanks for reading!
Great post! you had a very creative idea to do this artwork. I enjoyed reading it and job well done. I’m looking forward on your next post.
Thanks Jasper, I appreciate the comment!
I really want to know what will happen next in the JG’s vacation. I hope all the happenings will not spoil. I think I need a break and wish to go on a vacation next year.
Hi Isabella, well the next one is up and hilarity/calamity has ensued :) thanks for reading!
Indeed!A very funny comic.You’re very good with your craft.Keep the good work up.
I like your comic idea you are such a great !I hope I can do this also..
Great comic. I need a vacation too. it’s getting cold in Canada. Wish I had your talent.
Thanks Seb, I appreciate the compliment. Man that cold is setting in here in Wisconsin, USA too…brrrr…
Personally I don’t think there’s anything wrong with the 4-panel comic; is there some standard in the industry saying you have to go to only 3? Actually no, since one of my favorite comics vacillates between 2 & 4 panels all the time (I hope this doesn’t go into spam): http://www.gocomics.com/9chickweedlane/2011/11/12
So just go and do your thing. Course, me being me, I’m wondering if your girl has a weave or if that’s her natural hair. lol
Hey there Mitch! Nah there’s no real standard, I was only trying to set a goal for myself..and failing lol.
and LOL a couple of other people asked me if that was a weave! I figure I already got kicked in the face so I ain’t asking her! :)
Haha, I make winters and stuff? Well…um, nice try? I can see how condensing a strip into 3 or 4 panels would be hard- I guess you could try writing jokes? Like one-liner type things and try to turn that into comic form? If that makes sense…makes sense in my head. Lol.
Actually last pic is much more expressive than the others so I didn’t liked the idea of merging it with the third one, suggest one of the above commentators.
Nice work, love the bikini. =)
Thanks, I worked hard on those small cartoon strips of cloth lol! :)
Hey your work is such a big Wow!!!i love it… ever since i like to read comics;=)
Thanks a lot for reading, Meagan!
comics are really fun to read! :) hehe! good job!
Wow! Just found it. These are great. I’m going to read more!
JG,
That is some crazy and imaginative story line. It can pack a real punch in its meaning. A person could think about it for a while and keep thinking about possible messages.
Congrats
Haha love the comic. You just can’t escape from the crap no matter where you go huh? And I never really considered how hard it is to squeeze a cohesive story into 3 or 4 frames. (PS I also absolutely love Calvin & Hobbes!!)
No my trials and tribulations apparently will follow me to the ends of the Earth!
Oh, the indignity of being JG…
“Within reason of course” — Great line! You can have anything on the menu….under $20
Is it possible this is why I was kicked in the face? Nah, couldn’t be.